觀滄海 （三國）曹操

東臨碣石，以觀滄海。水何澹澹，山島竦峙。

樹木叢生，百草丰茂。秋風蕭瑟，洪波涌起。

日月之行，若出其中；星漢燦爛，若出其裡。

幸甚至哉！歌以詠志。

Watching the Blue Sea

by Cao Cao of Three Kingdoms period

Arriving at Jieshi in east

To watch the blue sea.

Water’s so tranquil;

Islands tower high.

Woods grow here and there;

All sorts of grass so lush.

Autumn winds soughing;

Billows surging.

The move of sun and moon

As if out of waves.

Galaxies of stars so brilliant

Like out from the sea.

Lucky to the utmost;

I sing out my wish.

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• 说句实话，可能不好听。你的英文是搬字典学出来的。 -verdeboy- ♂ (632 bytes) () 01/29/2011 postreply 08:14:02

• Another Version: I went east to view the emerald sea -verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/29/2011 postreply 08:46:06

• I learned a lot from 海外逸士's work, -北京二号- ♀ (151 bytes) () 01/29/2011 postreply 09:31:24

• verdeboy: 你写的是简单的散文，韵味不够. -3271963- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/29/2011 postreply 12:50:39

• 海外逸士's translation is better than yours!!! -3271963- ♀ (39 bytes) () 01/29/2011 postreply 12:57:34

• Like I would care your judgment. -Verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/29/2011 postreply 18:42:56

• 東臨碣石，以觀滄海。這是兩句﹐所以要分兩行翻譯。 -海外逸士- ♂ (91 bytes) () 01/29/2011 postreply 17:21:22

• 讨论一下，就这么一次。 -verdeboy- ♂ (685 bytes) () 01/29/2011 postreply 18:31:25

• 请举一首完整的英文诗歌中有动词但没有主语的描述句的例子。 -Verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/29/2011 postreply 18:37:07

• 翻譯要根據原文意思來。 -海外逸士- ♂ (470 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 06:01:19

• 漏了﹐補充﹕ -海外逸士- ♂ (59 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 06:21:30

• Hehe, you are what you are. -verdeboy- ♂ (679 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 08:01:13

• 朋友，请自重，有话好好说，不要骂人。 -3271963- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 08:24:59

• For chrisske, don't take my critical comments for bad-name-calli -verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 08:56:02

• hahaha, can't help laughing. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (43 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 10:12:12

• Thanks for shedding light on me about him. -verdeboy- ♂ (142 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 12:17:44

• 如是友好讨论，不必用"sucks"这个词。 -3271963- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 10:38:37

• Come on. Suck is not a bad word -Verdeboy- ♂ (40 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 13:23:29

• 本坛还是好人多！ 感谢海外逸士给美坛贡献的众多阅读欣赏作品！ -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 09:17:13

• 我觉得verdeboy给的是constuctive的批评。至少从他们的讨论，我是受益了。 -cicila- ♀ (69 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 09:24:09

• Thanks for giving me the credit. -Verdeboy- ♂ (46 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 12:25:59

• 文中的 nuance 这个词用的很到位。 -灰衣人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 09:08:04

• discussion inside -海外逸士- ♂ (1558 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 12:35:16

• This is not the right way to learn. I will back off. Good-luck. -Verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 13:21:02

• 請把話說完。 -海外逸士- ♂ (121 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 14:56:28

• 请去上面。 -Verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 16:09:06

• 学习了。谢谢。 -云雾山中- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/29/2011 postreply 11:26:33

• Please allow me to keep, it is great~ -laiyin- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/29/2011 postreply 16:09:48

• 提个建议哈 -冲浪潜水员- ♂ (75 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 00:09:11

• 逸士，兔年快乐。水何澹澹翻译得不到位。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (118 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 10:02:26

• A friendly suggestion -3271963- ♀ (363 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 10:23:19

• Friendly? Come on! -Verdeboy- ♂ (65 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 12:32:12