Hehe, you are what you are.

1.In prose and in poetry, one must have a subject in a declarative statement.  Everyone is dead wrong when they don't follow the rule. You're no exception.

2. In prose and in poetry, one must use the definite article before words like "east, west, north, south" to tell directions.Again you're no exception.

3. You do think that words like " see, watch, gaze, look ..." mean the same in poetry,huh? What an artist! No subject, no nuance, that's really the best poetry of your own kind.

4. Even your Chinese sucks when you insist on the first two lines of the original Chinese poem as two sentences.

 

 

 

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• 朋友，请自重，有话好好说，不要骂人。 -3271963- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 08:24:59

• For chrisske, don't take my critical comments for bad-name-calli -verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 08:56:02

• hahaha, can't help laughing. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (43 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 10:12:12

• Thanks for shedding light on me about him. -verdeboy- ♂ (142 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 12:17:44

• 如是友好讨论，不必用"sucks"这个词。 -3271963- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 10:38:37

• Come on. Suck is not a bad word -Verdeboy- ♂ (40 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 13:23:29

• 本坛还是好人多！ 感谢海外逸士给美坛贡献的众多阅读欣赏作品！ -billnet- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 09:17:13

• 我觉得verdeboy给的是constuctive的批评。至少从他们的讨论，我是受益了。 -cicila- ♀ (69 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 09:24:09

• Thanks for giving me the credit. -Verdeboy- ♂ (46 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 12:25:59

• 文中的 nuance 这个词用的很到位。 -灰衣人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 09:08:04

• discussion inside -海外逸士- ♂ (1558 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 12:35:16

• This is not the right way to learn. I will back off. Good-luck. -Verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 13:21:02

• 請把話說完。 -海外逸士- ♂ (121 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 14:56:28

• 请去上面。 -Verdeboy- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/30/2011 postreply 16:09:06