sweetie, I love you more than you know:)

sweetie again you have written a piece that is unsurmountable. Your piece is as clear as an undisturbed brook and it flows as smoothly as a river flows to a creek on a calm day. Sweetie you might not have realized, but your writing follows orwell's rules as closely as a man follows his sweetheart and your writing embraces orwell's thoughts as tightly an innocent girl clings to her first love:)
sweetie, yes I remember your 'write to express, not to impress' and I think it says it all

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• 能得到老熊的认可甚至于夸奖，我就没白写。。你真会夸人：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 14:47:46

• sweetie from your writings alone, I would -hahaman- ♀ (104 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 14:58:27

• i don't want everything from you, but -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (11 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:36:50

• haha, sweetie, you are so cute -hahaman- ♀ (77 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 17:13:46

• hahaman，你写的太美了，but -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (334 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 14:59:33

• opps, but your writing DID NOT follow orwell's rules -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:02:36

• who said that? i follow -hahaman- ♀ (10 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 16:43:02

• bear，这是我试着写并改的东西。经过这个piece，我对 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (728 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:13:26

• 这是试着改了第一段，加上了rhyme，其实，不完全是起初想表达的。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (214 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:22:29

• 回复：这是试着改了第一段，加上了rhyme，其实，不完全是起初想表达的。 -hahaman- ♀ (106 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 17:11:40

• 对，韵是这些诗体的一个要求。否则，就不能叫做１４行诗了 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (515 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 20:46:02

• oh, this is a misplacement. meant to follow with the one below. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 20:52:25

• sweetie you are as fast as light -hahaman- ♀ (269 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:00:11

• 谢谢bear。你真的是博学，一点不错。learned. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (107 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:06:49

• sweetie，你的诗写的真是很流畅。 -hahaman- ♀ (395 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:24:02

• 别抒情了；）。 我这周有deadline要meet。晚安。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:33:41

• Ok sweetie. I also have so much to do. Work is too much. -hahaman- ♀ (139 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:47:35

• hmm。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (50 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 20:07:19

• 刚要合上书本,your line make me忽然想起来你那个＂闪电门拴＂了：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (105 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:30:16

• haha sweetie, how do you remember everything? -hahaman- ♀ (41 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:41:39

• flys-->>flies -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:27:27

• bear，我跟着你练了这么多诗歌，这首是我比较 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (211 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 15:52:27

• sweetie 不要考虑韵除非是十四行等 -hahaman- ♀ (154 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 19:41:24

• this is -hahaman- ♀ (401 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 17:01:52

• 谢谢hahaman。我在看小人书。talk to u later。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 18:25:16

• sweetie I read it again and again -hahaman- ♀ (141 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 08:24:52

• great, -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (27 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 18:12:16