对，韵是这些诗体的一个要求。否则，就不能叫做１４行诗了

ok

i like the way you smile
and the way you joke
i love to see you show off
and read your remarks
i can feel what you feel
and think what you think
i'm glad when you're happy
and sad when you'er blue

（还有４行，没写完。是不想写完）


很多人都说韵不重要，但不管什么诗体有韵就是感觉漂亮。要不怎么会有＂韵味＂＂风韵＂等一系列与美丽相关的的字眼呢？:)

我觉得语言能力强的人词汇丰富的人来韵来的容易：）。所以我在夸你呢， bear。

我根本就不想写诗，就是觉得好玩。

所有跟帖： 

• oh, this is a misplacement. meant to follow with the one below. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 20:52:25

• sweetie you are as fast as light -hahaman- ♀ (269 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:00:11

• 谢谢bear。你真的是博学，一点不错。learned. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (107 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:06:49

• sweetie，你的诗写的真是很流畅。 -hahaman- ♀ (395 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:24:02

• 别抒情了；）。 我这周有deadline要meet。晚安。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:33:41

• Ok sweetie. I also have so much to do. Work is too much. -hahaman- ♀ (139 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:47:35

• hmm。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (50 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 20:07:19

• 刚要合上书本,your line make me忽然想起来你那个＂闪电门拴＂了：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (105 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:30:16

• haha sweetie, how do you remember everything? -hahaman- ♀ (41 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:41:39