sweetie you are as fast as light

you can write. within seconds you came up with 8 thoughtful lines. As always I am impressed.
Shakespeare often had to reorder words in order to have a rhyme. If we just follow the usual 主语 + 谓语，it's hard to get a good rhyme. True, vacabulary is important.

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• 谢谢bear。你真的是博学，一点不错。learned. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (107 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:06:49

• sweetie，你的诗写的真是很流畅。 -hahaman- ♀ (395 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:24:02

• 别抒情了；）。 我这周有deadline要meet。晚安。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:33:41

• Ok sweetie. I also have so much to do. Work is too much. -hahaman- ♀ (139 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:47:35

• hmm。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (50 bytes) () 05/05/2010 postreply 20:07:19

• 刚要合上书本,your line make me忽然想起来你那个＂闪电门拴＂了：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (105 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:30:16

• haha sweetie, how do you remember everything? -hahaman- ♀ (41 bytes) () 05/04/2010 postreply 21:41:39