sweetie, I love you more than you know:)
sweetie again you have written a piece that is unsurmountable. Your piece is as clear as an undisturbed brook and it flows as smoothly as a river flows to a creek on a calm day. Sweetie you might not have realized, but your writing follows orwell's rules as closely as a man follows his sweetheart and your writing embraces orwell's thoughts as tightly an innocent girl clings to her first love:)
sweetie, yes I remember your 'write to express, not to impress' and I think it says it all