几天不练自己知道,别人更知道。好久没练写作。今天写了一封信给旧同事,发出去之前请大家斧正。谢谢。

本帖于 2011-08-11 07:14:53 时间, 由版主 林贝卡 编辑

XXX,

I am glad to learn that everything goes well with you and your family.
 


10 years passed even before we could realize. How scary it is! When I watched the MV and movie that Taotao played as the hero, I was shocked by how fast time flies. He was only 6 when I first saw him, sweet and shy, at an age not much older than my girl is now. Later I was a little excited to see that the little boy grew up into a handsome young man whom I could barely recognize on the screen, but still with the smile that I was once very familiar with.  We don't need to be reminded that we are 10 years older because the next generation could not wait to take over the leading roles!  I could not help feeling sad at the same time. When I met you in the lab for the first time, I was only 21, the same age as Taotao is now. How many ten years can a person have in his/her life? Perhaps, the next time when I wake up, my now 2 and half year old is in college as Taotao is now.I was a little scared by this thought but felt that my girl and I had to be lucky enough to have that day. 

Back to reality now. Although I forgot lots of details in the passed 10 years, I do feel happy and honored that I spent several most important years of my life with you in the group as your student and have witnessed the growth and thriving of our group. I am so proud that I was part of the group and always cherish those good old days we worked together. Regardless of where I am, my heart is always with you and the group.  

As to me, I am not optimistic about the economy and the job market in US. People like my hubby  feel lucky to keep their jobs nowadays.  I almost give up the hope of getting a decent job around where I live with my current resume after months of effort. Now I am taking classes to get a certificate in order to keep myself active in the field. I am also considering learning something new that might help me get a job. But I am not entirely sure which direction I want to go. So, I am taking time to polish my English this summer, both in oral and in written. I have to refine my language skills to ensure my quality life. I will be taking some fun courses at a local community college in the coming fall. Still do not know where to go and what to do next year. The good thing is while my girl is still little, I am lucky to get the chance to spend quality time with her. I am also lucky to have my hu*****and's full support, fiscally and mentally. I am hoping that my staying at home could somewhat enrich the lives of my family.  

 
By the way, have you gotten a chance to watch the MV and movie that Taotao played?  I am totally surprised by how liberal the young generation in China is. Taotao looks glamorous in the movies,shining and sparkling like a real movie star. His face is totally a copy of his Mom. But he has got your nose. Too sad. That is the only part I could find from his face that I could see your genes. I am just kidding! I am just wondering that many years ago, did you also wander around the same campus as a tall and skinny while refined-behavior young student? I just tried hard to put you about 30 years younger back onto the same campus when I watched the movie Taotao played. And I tried to imagine a pure love story between you and your then girlfriend/now wife on campus. Am I right that the girl in the MV and movie is Taotao then girlfriend you mentioned to me last year? She looks hard to control though. I am glad that Taotao made the right decision to finish their relationship. hehe. I know, I am getting a little too talktive. hehe. I shut up now and give you a break. Couldn't help gossiping with you as a terribly bored and isolated middle-aged housewife.

 Take good care of you and your family! Please pass my best wishes and greetings to them.

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solly,没时间练写作,写信充数啦。大家帮我砸砖哈。我照单全收。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 00:59:14

写得不错!就是有点儿罗嗦,不知道从何砸起,我对付第一段吧。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (1453 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 01:42:26

还有: -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (198 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 01:43:59

谢谢老相好,写作提高太不容易了。太需要功底了。你挑出来的我拿小本本记下了。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:23:23

“before we could realize”,是不是想表达“不知不觉”--unconciously? -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 07:49:15

哦,不地道。realize用得不对。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 08:12:26

翻译课的《读好书》中,有“全然不知不觉”中,用的是unconciously。 -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 08:19:39

谢美风。我那课翻译逃课,损失大啊。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:24:46

似乎你逃了好几课了。赶紧归队,还来得及。呵呵。 -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:26:53

好的,好的。这周我彻底有空了。我写作起点太低,大家多担待哈。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:29:20

亲爱的,客人打发了?真好! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (35 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:31:56

是!偶激动死了。总算太平了。她有两个potential onsite interviews 都在东部。正好,她怕麻烦东西飞来飞去 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (71 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 10:06:53

用在这里不地道吗? -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:25:43

我的意思是,我没想过用unconsiously,因为逃课了。用在这里肯定可以的。谢谢美风。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:28:09

on second thought,那个unconsciously不能用这里,因为主语是10years -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (28 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:49:50

Good point!!! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:59:11

不是,我是说我老相好的那句不地道。对时间过去用不用unconsciously不太确定。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (56 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:28:42

请教,如果我想说,时间在我们来不及意识到之前已经溜走了,这个怎么说地道? -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:30:36

我说你的那个realize用得不对是因为realize是及物动词,必须接点东东。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (35 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:47:46

i see! 谢谢老相好。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 10:04:10

看你写,再看文青他们修改,我坐享其成...... -千与.千寻- 给 千与.千寻 发送悄悄话 千与.千寻 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 03:55:20

您歇着,我给您端茶打扇捶腿。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:25:50

不错,其实您可以很清楚的用英文表达您的意思了~~~ -lilac09- 给 lilac09 发送悄悄话 lilac09 的博客首页 (5832 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 08:07:22

sorry, missed something out in a rush~ -lilac09- 给 lilac09 发送悄悄话 lilac09 的博客首页 (473 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:28:16

万分谢谢!送上金条若干作为润笔费。我提个小小要求,您要是有空,把我其他几段也改写了吧。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (69 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 09:33:54

最后这一大段有点纠结,我帮您顺了顺。第一段文青给你看了,我就不改了~~ -lilac09- 给 lilac09 发送悄悄话 lilac09 的博客首页 (2951 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 11:54:52

大顶!看来不奔不足以谢您啊。您看了非美女的照片还有动力帮我改吗? -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 13:16:48

MM放心,知道您是文青MM的老相好,俺不会抢花的,就观赏一眼,嘎嘎~~ -lilac09- 给 lilac09 发送悄悄话 lilac09 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 13:27:03

金条的不要,给大家闪一张吧,嘿嘿~~ -lilac09- 给 lilac09 发送悄悄话 lilac09 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 12:01:02

那我真是找拍啊。行!我找找有没有可以见人的。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 13:10:58

您要闪,就吆喝一嗓子~~我怕错过 -lilac09- 给 lilac09 发送悄悄话 lilac09 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 13:29:00

CO:您要闪,就吆喝一嗓子~~我怕错过 -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/08/2011 postreply 13:58:12

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