最后这一大段有点纠结，我帮您顺了顺。第一段文青给你看了，我就不改了~~

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回答: 万分谢谢！送上金条若干作为润笔费。我提个小小要求，您要是有空，把我其他几段也改写了吧。由 i999 于 2011-08-08 09:33:54

最后这一大段有点纠结，我帮您顺了顺。第一段文青给你看了，我就不改了

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By the way, have you gotten a chance to watch the MV and movie that Taotao played? I am totally surprised by how liberal the young generation in China is. Taotao looks glamorous in the movies, shining and sparkling like a real movie star. His face is totally a copy of his Mom. But he has got your nose. Too sad. That is the only part I could find from his face that I could see your genes. I am just kidding! I am just wondering that many years ago, did you also wander around the same campus as a tall and skinny while refined-behavior young student? I just tried hard to put you about 30 years younger back onto the same campus when I watched the movie Taotao played. And I tried to imagine a pure love story between you and your then girlfriend/now wife on campus. Am I right that the girl in the MV and movie is Taotao then girlfriend you mentioned to me last year? She looks hard to control though. I am glad that Taotao made the right decision to finish their relationship. hehe. I know, I am getting a little too talktive. hehe. I shut up now and give you a break. Couldn't help gossiping with you as a terribly bored and isolated middle-aged housewife.

我的改写，不一定吃透了您的意思。不象上一段，这段我不是很清楚, 主要帮您理理句序
By the way, have you gotten a chance to watch the MV and movie that Taotao played ? I am totally thrown by how liberal the young generation in China is. Taotao looks glamorous in the movies, shining like a real movie star.

People say like father like son. But I can only tell that from his nose. He looks a lot like his mom. Don’t be upset. Actually, the nose is the best feature he has got. I am just kidding.

When I was watching the MV that Taotao played in, I couldn’t help wondering what you were doing 30 years ago on the same campus. Did you also wander around as a tall, thin and refined young guy back then? How did you date your then sweetheart/now wife on campus? It must be a pure and beautiful love story.

BTW, is the girl in the MV Taotao’s ex girlfriend whom you mentioned to me last year? To be honest with you, she looks a bit *****y. I am glad that Taotao made the right decision to break up with her. Hehe, I am getting a little too talkative and gossipy. Once a terribly bored and isolated middle-aged housewife opens her mouth, she tends to yap all day long. So I’d better shut up now and give you a break.