浪淘沙（南唐）李煜

帘外雨潺潺，春意闌珊。羅衾不耐五更寒。夢里不知身是客，一晌貪歡。
獨自莫憑欄，無限江山。別時容易見時難。流水落花春去也，天上人間。

Poem in tune of Langtongsha
by Li Yi of South Tang Dynasty

As rains pattering outside window curtains,
I can feel spring is almost over.
Gauze quilts can't resist the cold of dawn.
In my dream, I don't know I am the guest,
Always indulging in pleasure.

Don't loll on the railing alone,
(Facing) Rivers and Hills stretching far and wide.
It's easy to part with, but hard to see again.
flowing water, fallen blossoms, spring gone,
On heaven and in the human world.

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• 逸士，那个梦里不知身是客的客是阶下囚的意思。guest 会误导英语读者 -sportwoman- ♀ (90 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 06:35:17

• English readers might think he was having a party. -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 06:36:16

• 逸士先别气啊：） 用prisoner; captive点睛之笔。 -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 07:00:03

• 這反而把詩人原文裡“客”字的點睛作用挖掉了。 -海外逸士- ♂ (131 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 08:07:17

• Prisoners under house arrest -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 08:15:31

• 畫蛇添足。我不知道為什麼你們老是要譯者解釋。 -海外逸士- ♂ (268 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 08:56:33

• 我是解释给你听，让你用captive -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 09:09:09

• 同意 -聚曦亭- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 07:42:24

• 這個問題在另一網站上也有人跟我討論過。 -海外逸士- ♂ (472 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 08:02:14

• running water, fading flowers， on heaven and earth -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 06:43:59

• 您的翻译我没能读出李煜那种无可奈何花落去的愁苦，敢说英语读者亦然。他们会以为此君太爱玩 -sportwoman- ♀ (22 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 06:51:32

• endless rivers and mountains -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 08:32:01

• 這個意思可以有多種譯法。 -海外逸士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 08:58:15

• hills 小山，用mountains 对比强烈，读者一看是hills感觉是小山头，不要也罢有什么可惜的？ -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 09:07:56

• 回复：浪淘沙（南唐）李煜 -聚曦亭- ♀ (530 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 08:49:36

• captive 可以让读者想象到臣虏生涯不好受。 -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 09:00:49

• 回复：captive 可以让读者想象到臣虏生涯不好受。 -海外逸士- ♂ (137 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 09:13:36

• 不是也给你看了吗，客--阶下囚 。一旦归为臣虏，沈腰潘鬓消磨，guest体现不出，得换词。 -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 09:16:40

• 我是作为普通读者给你我读后真实的感觉，你可以不听。不是有没有资格看的问题， -sportwoman- ♀ (31 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 14:52:37

• sorry, I don't mean you. generally speaking. -海外逸士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2012 postreply 06:38:11

• that is ok 逸士。 -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/13/2012 postreply 09:52:08

• 回复：回复：浪淘沙（南唐）李煜 -海外逸士- ♂ (277 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 09:10:42

• guest is proper -BobV- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 13:06:06

• 才看明白原来是对内版本，那么对外版本应该在用词方面让人一看就明白。现代的年轻人都很忙一看那么多解释就没耐性。 -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/12/2012 postreply 14:05:44