明天是端午节，想起了小时候我老爸包的紫沙粽。

白米红枣紫沙粽
包进千年追思情
芦苇翻浪离骚曲
糯叶流香五月风

In the rice, red dates and purple beans,
the millennium memory is wrapped
Accompanied with Li-Sao reeds wave
In May wind wafts the scent of reed leaves

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• my understanding: -help15- ♀ (227 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 10:52:05

• thank you, help. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (202 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:01:05

• thank you . -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:08:12

• but why do you make inversion? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:12:31

• 为了有点rhythm，尽量上口。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:17:26

• 双语好诗，精彩。戏雨飞鹰，给你和大家送粽子来了： -紫君- ♀ (3207 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:15:47

• 太美了，太馋人了。音乐更让我想中国老家了。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:23:58

• Today my acct increased >$1000 -走马读人- ♂ (393 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:23:38

• oh, my goodness.., old horse, -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (81 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:28:41

• 狗尾续貂.... :( -走马读人- ♂ (136 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:31:27

• english version please? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:33:24

• 诗囊 -走马读人- ♂ (830 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:45:52

• sorry, i meant the English version translated from your orignal -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:59:07

• 大师, 你取的这些谐音字多有诗意啊，真的是佩服！ -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:35:13

• ***********:))) -走马读人- ♂ (102 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:39:55

• 老马的version正是我的心语。谢谢horse大师。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (116 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:46:04

• Excellent poem! -美坛奇葩- ♂ (24 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:57:50

• newbie大师，你去哪里修炼了？好久不见。我也很想吃粽子。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (36 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:07:52

• 回复： -美坛奇葩- ♂ (468 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:38:45

• well written and great suggestion. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (200 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:43:41

• sweetie, this is a very fine piece -bearsback- ♂ (227 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:47:32

• the w words: with, wrap, wind and waft are 韵? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 12:53:58

• 头韵 -bearsback- ♂ (33 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:09:43

• 你这是广义的头晕：）。严格来讲， -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (374 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:25:29

• yes I agree -bearsback- ♂ (119 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 14:57:00

• 回复：yes I agree -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (197 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:30:18

• 不管room多大 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:31:53

• you are right. yes you are -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 16:26:34

• thanks。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (93 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:19:17

• 哈哈哈 I was replying to your first paragraph -bearsback- ♂ (31 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:42:06

• i knew it ( for 1st part). i was teasing you:):) -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:48:09

• 距离太远的偷越， -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (26 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:38:40

• I agree. The closer the better -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 14:58:42

• 回复：I agree. The closer the better -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (76 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:16:37

• what? -bearsback- ♂ (120 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 16:25:44

• thanks -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (211 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:44:36

• 还是自由体舒服。 -bearsback- ♂ (19 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:29:37

• ：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (52 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:04:42

• or, just a quote, i just found it -bearsback- ♂ (249 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 20:55:06

• 你不说我都不知道 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (90 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:31:39

• Based on your work ... -美坛奇葩- ♂ (454 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:03:04

• hmm，你的version我非常喜欢。也很逻辑。help看后肯定不会 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (34 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:12:49

• laugh at me? haha. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:22:09

• so头韵是相同的字母,尾韵是末尾的字母 ? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:27:51

• 回复：so头韵是相同的字母,字母 ? -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (52 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:35:33

• 头韵是开头是相同的字母 or the same consonant? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:40:46

• consonant -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:44:26

• leaves, dates. melodies have no韵? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:49:01

• listen, 我很喜欢bear说的the lines： -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (139 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:50:42

• last question: when you turn a piece of writing into poem -help15- ♀ (73 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 14:09:12

• 其实，我一般就是直接写出来， -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (257 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:05:09

• "束缚住', not "舒服出" -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:09:42

• no. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:51:49

• like it.: leaves, dates; month, melodies. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:20:59

• Thank you! -美坛奇葩- ♂ (19 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:48:13

• Why would I catch mice when I have fish? -美坛奇葩- ♂ (34 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:25:01

• hahaha, xiexie:). i like yours -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:26:43

• 好诗，下班前和飞鹰mm一首 -lilac09- ♀ (254 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:48:24

• Excellent poem! -美坛奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:50:54

• 谢花美美同学~:） -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:19:16

• 这绝句的太美了。我都读不够。欣赏。：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 17:55:42

• 你的有历史有追思有人情，写的好, 同欣赏。：） -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:17:51

• 我过两天要很忙。有时间跟你一起学英语。你英语好。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:06:15

• 城里姓紫的真多。 诗潭有紫色王家。这里又好几个 -bearsback- ♂ (38 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 21:08:53

• 很棒很棒 -板板- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:08:31

• 谢谢，向板板学习：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:52:50

• all are great. -deepwoods- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 18:41:34

• thanks,说的太对了，从老马的２pieces到奇葩的piece和建议，到里拉的５绝和紫君的美粽，都是精品。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (139 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:01:48

• your is excellent. -deepwoods- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:11:06

• 谢大侠！ -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (112 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:42:00

• i am nobody, hehe. -deepwoods- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 19:46:32

• 鹰妹，我说你可能不信 -bearsback- ♂ (54 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 22:08:19

• 粽子没啥好吃的。but -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (69 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 06:46:38

• I did not know that -bearsback- ♂ (28 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 10:24:01

• 双语翻译：haha -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (197 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 07:01:18

• haha great. 你也变小偷了？哈哈 I love the author's name -bearsback- ♂ (53 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 10:07:22

• oops 心上人 -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 10:09:24