my understanding:

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the rice, red dates and purple beans are in,
the millennium memory is wrapped
and accompanied with Li-Sao reeds wave,
the scent of reed leaves wafts in May wind.

right?

beans,leaves 压头韵 [i:]压尾韵[vz]

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• thank you, help. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ 给 戏雨飞鹰 发送悄悄话 戏雨飞鹰 的博客首页 (202 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:01:05

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• but why do you make inversion? -help15- ♀ 给 help15 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 11:12:31

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