Based on your work ...

In the reed leaves,
Wrapped are sticky rice, purple beans and red dates;
At beginning of the fifth lunar month,
The Dragon boat Festival wafts Lisao poetic melodies.

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白米红枣紫沙粽
包进千年追思情
芦苇翻浪离骚曲
糯叶流香五月风

In the rice, red dates and purple beans,
the millennium memory is wrapped
Accompanied with Li-Sao reeds wave
In May wind wafts the scent of reed leaves

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• hmm，你的version我非常喜欢。也很逻辑。help看后肯定不会 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (34 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:12:49

• laugh at me? haha. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:22:09

• so头韵是相同的字母,尾韵是末尾的字母 ? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:27:51

• 回复：so头韵是相同的字母,字母 ? -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (52 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:35:33

• 头韵是开头是相同的字母 or the same consonant? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:40:46

• consonant -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:44:26

• leaves, dates. melodies have no韵? -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:49:01

• listen, 我很喜欢bear说的the lines： -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (139 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:50:42

• last question: when you turn a piece of writing into poem -help15- ♀ (73 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 14:09:12

• 其实，我一般就是直接写出来， -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (257 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:05:09

• "束缚住', not "舒服出" -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 15:09:42

• no. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:51:49

• like it.: leaves, dates; month, melodies. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:20:59

• Thank you! -美坛奇葩- ♂ (19 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:48:13

• Why would I catch mice when I have fish? -美坛奇葩- ♂ (34 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:25:01

• hahaha, xiexie:). i like yours -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2010 postreply 13:26:43