克里斯蒂娜·罗塞蒂十四行诗《Remember 记着》

Remember
《记着》

Christina Rossetti (1830 - 1894)
作者：克里斯蒂娜·罗塞蒂

翻译：忒绿

Remember me when I am gone away,
记着我吧，当我就要远走，

Gone far away into the silent land;
去遥远的一块寂静之地；

When you can no more hold me by the hand,
当你不能再握我的手时，

Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay.
我也不再能够半走半留。

Remember me when no more day by day
记着我吧，当你不再能够

You tell me of our future that you planned:
成天地谈论我们的未来：

Only remember me; you understand
只是记着我吧；你要明白

It will be late to counsel then or pray.
劝说祷告是太晚的徒劳。

Yet if you should forget me for a while
即使你一些日子忘了我

And afterwards remember, do not grieve:
而后又想起，请不要悲哀：

For if the darkness and corruption leave
因为如果黑暗以及腐败

A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,
让我在你心中留下残迹，

Better by far you should forget and smile
此时，你最好忘记并微笑

Than that you should remember and be sad.
不要依然记着，空留悲戚。

Christina Georgina Rossetti (5 December 1830– 29 December 1894) was an English writer of romantic, devotional and children's poems, including "Goblin Market" and "Remember". She also wrote the words of two Christmas carols well known in Britain: "In the Bleak Midwinter", later set by Gustav Holst, Katherine Kennicott Davis, and Harold Darke, and "Love Came Down at Christmas", also set by Darke and other composers. She was a sister of the artist and poet Dante Gabriel Rossetti II and features in several of his paintings.

Rosetti wrote the poem in 1849 at the age of 19, though it was first published in 1862 in her collection Goblin Market and Other Poems.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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• 语言没有时间的限制，绿诗人把100多年前的诗翻译得忒忒好，味道押韵都刚刚好：） -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 15:43:39

• 妖妖午安：） -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 15:47:00

• 诗是灵魂的歌，没有年轮：）周末愉快！ -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 15:48:00

• 这是那个时代的诗歌玩法：十四行诗，将就韵律和固定字节。这首诗中，每一行有十个音节。翻成中文每行同样的字数有点难：）抛砖 -忒忒绿- ♂ (252 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 15:56:00

• 真好，学习了。诗歌诗歌，每行的音节数就像歌词的音节数一样是有限制的。 -妖妖灵- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 16:14:30

• Very commendable effort on 绿绿‘s part. To -ibelieu- ♀ (351 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 16:53:30

• Hi Ibe, thanks for your nice comments:)) -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 16:59:00

• 谢谢分享。点赞。 -chuntianle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 18:41:34

• and very good suggestion for the third line fm bottom. Could it -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:02:00

• could it be shorter into ten Chinese characters:)) -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:04:00

• 尽管黑暗并同朽腐降临，如若我对你的影响犹存 -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:21:02

• very nice! we still think about the rhymes to compliant with con -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:40:00

• 如若我的影响犹存痕迹？ ：） -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:46:48

• And, is there a better rendition for “the thoughts”? -忒忒绿- ♂ (209 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:42:00

• 是很难，诗的原意似乎就是：我更希望你能忘了我这个人， -ibelieu- ♀ (86 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:49:02

• I follow the link to read the analysis on the poem :)) -忒忒绿- ♂ (361 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 18:02:00

• 很棒。赞。周末愉快。 -chuntianle- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 18:39:16

• 谢谢春天雅临赏评：） -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 18:45:00

• 赞对英文诗歌的热情，佩服 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/20/2022 postreply 06:22:25

• 翻译得不错，忒忒Green！ -何仙姑- ♀ (195 bytes) () 03/20/2022 postreply 06:48:20

• 谢盈盈仙姑，周末愉快：） -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/20/2022 postreply 09:35:00

• 恭喜忒绿。首页进来，谢谢网管，克里斯蒂娜·罗塞蒂十四行诗《Remember 记着》推荐成功 -梅雨潭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2022 postreply 13:37:02