and very good suggestion for the third line fm bottom. Could it
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• could it be shorter into ten Chinese characters:)) -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:04:00
• 尽管黑暗并同朽腐降临,如若我对你的影响犹存 -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:21:02
• very nice! we still think about the rhymes to compliant with con -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:40:00
• 如若我的影响犹存痕迹? :) -ibelieu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:46:48
• And, is there a better rendition for “the thoughts”? -忒忒绿- ♂ (209 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:42:00
• 是很难,诗的原意似乎就是:我更希望你能忘了我这个人, -ibelieu- ♀ (86 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 17:49:02
• I follow the link to read the analysis on the poem :)) -忒忒绿- ♂ (361 bytes) () 03/19/2022 postreply 18:02:00