用 your 更能让读者看出诗人对蜀相的敬意

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回答: 蜀 相 （唐）杜甫 由 海外逸士 于 2012-08-20 08:08:07

The Premier of Shu Kingdom


Where to seek for the temple of the premier?


Outside JinGuan Town with cypresses so lush.


Green grass on steps reflects the color of spring;


Orioles beyond leaves have vain sweet warbling.


Three visits to bother him for tactics in affairs under heaven;


Heart of old courtier on starting the dynasty of two generations. 


这两句需要联在一起吧？  平衡一下，把后面的两朝搬到前面来：Two generations of the dynasty were started under  your  whole-hearted assistance   (用your 表达出诗人对蜀相的敬意）


But he died before the army gained victory,


Which makes heroes wet gown fronts with tears.  ？ （襟：lapel, turndown, turndown collar, revers)

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