不好意思给您添堵了,我的写作练习麻烦帮忙改错和改进句法和修辞。叩谢!

本帖于 2011-07-01 13:32:45 时间, 由普通用户 i999 编辑

Improving my English grammar


 


     When asked how to improve my English writing, my previous advisor simply mentioned that I just needed to pay more attention to what I wrote.  It sounds easier than it really is. I relied on my advisor too much on writing when I was in school. As long as I got the papers published, I just did the mimimum and did not care about how to improve my writing by myself. Now, I am looking for a job and then realize that good writing skills are essential for almost all the jobs I have applied.


      I know that the structure and the content of an article are the  foremost for attracting readers. However, when practicing my English writing, I realized that I made too many grammar mistakes, which made my writing lousy. Some of the mistakes were made because I was reckless; others were made because I did not even have a clue about the right rules to use. Then, in order to have a solid grammar training which is fundamental towards a good writing, I started to read grammar books again, ten years after I took my TOFEL exam when was the last time I read a grammar book.


 


    When I got to the details of the rules and the exceptions of English grammar, my hands were sweating. The more I read, the more I realized that how many mistakes I have made. I even made lethal mistakes in my cover letters for job applications. No wonder I get no responses from those hiring companies.  On the other hand, I felt lost in all the rules and exceptions. It is hard to memorize all the details without using them on a daily basis. Thus, I decide to practice everyday. Try to write something and utilize what I have learned. My grammar practice is really weak based on my self-evaluation and feedbacks from others. The good part is that I have a large room to improve, whereas the bad part is that I have a lot to do to be on the right track.


 


If I just practice on my own, those blind spots in my wrting may never be found. So, I need help from you guys. Please help me to correct my mistakes and therefore make my writing better. Hope you do not mind that my writing is really poor. I also beg you for the tips towards proper usage of grammar in writing. Thanks.

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Wow, good writing -金迷- 给 金迷 发送悄悄话 金迷 的博客首页 (4027 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 12:18:41

回复:Wow, good writing -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (91 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 12:55:40

my comments (Please take it with a grain of salt) -同学小薇- 给 同学小薇 发送悄悄话 (7171 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 12:25:54

回复:my comments (Please take it with a grain of salt) -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (258 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 12:54:37

回复:回复:my comments (Please take it with a grain of salt) -金迷- 给 金迷 发送悄悄话 金迷 的博客首页 (146 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 13:03:30

回复:回复:回复:my comments (Please take it with a grain of salt) -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (80 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 13:07:39

Hi, i999 -同学小薇- 给 同学小薇 发送悄悄话 (835 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 13:27:09

回复:Hi, i999 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (253 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 13:45:34

great writing. -lmao- 给 lmao 发送悄悄话 (168 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 12:36:28

回复:great writing. -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (33 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 12:57:27

回复:great writing. -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (455 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 13:13:22

sounds like a great plan! -lmao- 给 lmao 发送悄悄话 (201 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 13:24:15

回复:sounds like a great plan! -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (396 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 13:37:56

Bricky house --> brick house or house made of bricks -同学小薇- 给 同学小薇 发送悄悄话 (41 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 13:51:41

回复:Bricky house --> brick house or house made of bricks -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (161 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 13:58:05

yes, I heard of brick house, not bricky house. -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 17:53:20

回复:yes, I heard of brick house, not bricky house. -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (15 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 21:15:55

老相好功力见长,比前几天写溜溜的那个小短文写得好很多。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (25273 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 18:05:35

回复:老相好功力见长,比前几天写溜溜的那个小短文写得好很多。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (23 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 21:10:50

回复:老相好功力见长,比前几天写溜溜的那个小短文写得好很多。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (98 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 21:21:19

回复:老相好功力见长,比前几天写溜溜的那个小短文写得好很多。 -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (216 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 21:32:34

is "uncareful" a word? careless is better than neglectful -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (42 bytes) () 07/01/2011 postreply 22:13:22

回复:不好意思给您添堵了,我的写作练习麻烦帮忙改错和改进句法和修辞。叩谢! -selfselfself- 给 selfselfself 发送悄悄话 selfselfself 的博客首页 (7580 bytes) () 07/02/2011 postreply 12:11:52

continue.... -selfselfself- 给 selfselfself 发送悄悄话 selfselfself 的博客首页 (2707 bytes) () 07/02/2011 postreply 20:47:44

回复:continue.... -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (20 bytes) () 07/02/2011 postreply 21:45:34

I learned a lot from your comments. Thanks, Big S and i999! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 07/02/2011 postreply 22:44:56

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