哈哈,俺刚看到,太有才了,俺很喜欢这儿歌（18-),俺消受的起~

这"里拉"，"里拉"的，"脚着里拉屐，身穿里拉衣" 乍一听象是"脚着垃圾屐，身穿垃圾衣"，男同鞋就是缺点美感.

俺正时尚一人，就把俺往美里吹吹呗
您说里拉，没人知道是lilac，你说丁香，大家就知道是lilac
改成“丁香”，意译不音译，不坏韵吧?

脚着丁香屐
身穿丁香衣
等到提笔时
方知水平低

大作俺收下了，回头裱好了，挂俺博客里~~

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• 哈哈，看我，丁香都没认的，水平真是低。你改得好。 -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:45:18

• 俺很稀饭您这首英诗里的amusement，比汉诗的有“藏”劲儿 -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:54:50

• I took it as "饭太稀" when I first looked at it. -amazing_grace- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 14:44:05

• 网路用语，网路用语 ~~ 就是不好好说话:) -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:32:14

• 谢谢解释，我以前只知道fantasy. -amazing_grace- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:48:15

• haha, 饭太稀. you are smart. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:50:29

• haha I know. I was also amused by the English one -bearsback- ♂ (79 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 19:14:58

• 回复：haha I know. I was also amused by the English one -lilac09- ♀ (381 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:47:26

• haha you are smart -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 00:54:02

• 双语诗歌：爱的磁性 给里拉 （lilac) 作者：bearsback -林贝卡- ♀ (4914 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:33:54

• hahahaha my goodness, that is beautiful. thank you! -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:44:40

• 贝卡mm，额的神呀，您先接受俺膜拜一下~~~~~ -lilac09- ♀ (112 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:53:31

• COOL。我也要学写 儿歌 & SONNET。很受鼓励 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:13:37

• 切! 这下你又不怕变成书呆子了？？ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:20:11

• 不用变，本来就是书呆子 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:23:59

• 哈么意思？你是说bear是书呆子？hehe。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:25:23

• hehe, i got it。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:36:39

• 这么漂亮！明年我结婚５０周年，一定找贝卡给我弄个跟这一样的。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:30:47

• ５０周年,那得是在SPACE CRAFT上 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:40:32

• Sure. Just let me know when your wedding anniversary is. -林贝卡- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:33:53

• 谢谢贝卡。差点missed点你的美意：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 09:58:33

• So pretty and I love the music too~~~ -梅石莹玉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 19:03:36

• 回复：So pretty and I love the music too~~~ -林贝卡- ♀ (1761 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:39:11