莎士比亚《Venus and Adonis》翻译 - 142

For who hath she to spend the night withal

But idle sounds resembling parasites,

Like shrill-tongued tapsters answering every call,

Soothing the humour of fantastic wits?

She says ''Tis so:' they answer all ''Tis so;'

And would say after her, if she said 'No.'

 

度夜无伴神女孤， 

嗡嗡唯有小飞虫， 

虽有饶舌应声奴， 

思绪翩翩仍从容？

神女言某彼答某；

神女言否奴答否。

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• 喜欢1, 5, 6句；或许其他句再接近原文些？大侠译沙翁，我是应声虫。闹玩别介意，学海有迷踪。 -淘金客- ♂ (292 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 04:24:45

• 非常好，足见你下了功夫 -bmdn- ♀ (70 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 08:15:20

• 谢谢喜欢和鼓励！想真学点东西，得下点功夫。没问题，尽管采用，荣幸之至！ -淘金客- ♂ (132 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 09:44:49

• 格律名字不知道 -bmdn- ♀ (215 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 14:00:52

• 过谦了！很佩服大侠的中英文功底和持之以恒的毅力，向你看齐！都说沙翁诗好剧好， -淘金客- ♂ (87 bytes) () 02/06/2013 postreply 19:38:14

• 谢了！ -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/07/2013 postreply 13:47:05