on second thought:

来源: lmao 于 2011-06-29 16:32:41 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (258 bytes)
回答: my additional comments: 由 lmao 于 2011-06-29 16:14:09

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I’ve never thought to work hard like an immigrant, though my identity is.-->though I am. I would suggest: though I am one. reads better.

jeering is another new word for me, I need to improve my vocabulary. hoho.

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