my additional comments:

来源: lmao 于 2011-06-29 16:14:09 [] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (482 bytes)
回答: 我的作业 由 cutestream 于 2011-06-29 07:55:54

There must be many American have senses of alienation due to their facial appearances,

as NewVoice said, good use of alienation! maybe a sense of alienation? I would suggest: have senses of alienation-->feel alienated from their ...

the mother language: either use mother tongue, or native language, not a combination of the two.

eldership?

I’ve never thought to work hard like an immigrant, though my identity is.-->though I am.?

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