祝贺你进步很大!我的一点商榷

祝贺你进步很大!我的一点商榷

Things conceiled gradually get clear
Thousands of words turn into silence
Love is a superstition with right time and right place
Oh, so you are here too
该隐瞒的事总清晰, 千言万语只能无语
爱是天时地利的迷信, 喔 原来你也在这里

My  version:

The concealed things’always gradually become clear

Thousands of words only turm into silence

Love is a superstition in the right place at the right time

Oh,so you are here,too.

 

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• 谢谢武都，你的版本更加精确的表达了原文的意思和语气,非常感谢。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (483 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 11:00:28

• 这里加comma before the word “too” ,是为了加强语气吗？）,你是对的. -武都水坝- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 11:23:37

• 这里加comma before the word “too” ,是为了加强语气吗？）你是对的. -武都水坝- ♀ (83 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 11:25:04

• 谢谢。仔细想想 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (114 bytes) () 11/26/2010 postreply 11:54:05