祝贺你进步很大!我的一点商榷

祝贺你进步很大!我的一点商榷

Things conceiled gradually get clear
Thousands of words turn into silence
Love is a superstition with right time and right place
Oh, so you are here too
该隐瞒的事总清晰, 千言万语只能无语
爱是天时地利的迷信, 喔 原来你也在这里

My  version:

The concealed things’always gradually become clear

Thousands of words only turm into silence

Love is a superstition in the right place at the right time

Oh,so you are here,too.