haha 宝贝，我刷碗还没吃饭呢

Lets me try the first stanza:

清澈的小河
依偎着
起伏的山壑

a clear creek
clinges
to the rolling valleys

(possibly heaving valleys as well)

sweetie, please notice alliteration:)

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• A good beginning -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (104 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:15:35

• sweetie, let's help15 run the remaining -bearsback- ♂ (14 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:24:10

• help15 is great. 据说她刚买了３块bricks。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 16:45:06

• haha, then time for her to show off:) -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:45:47

• the alliteration"clear creek clinges" 真的有种 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (51 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:27:37

• sharp ears -bearsback- ♂ (105 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:54:26

• 在这句里，我喜欢 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (267 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 14:00:59

• 回复：在这句里，我喜欢 -bearsback- ♂ (196 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 14:09:20

• 你好厉害！PFPF. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (368 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 17:15:28

• 对不起啊，bear。我是瞎说一通。haha。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (66 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:24:30

• 都是我借你一块砖给闹的, 哼, 还回来! haha. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:41:14

• you were absolutely right when you said -bearsback- ♂ (73 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:47:01

• 回复：对不起啊，bear。我是瞎说一通。haha。 -bearsback- ♂ (88 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:49:51

• sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations! -bearsback- ♂ (329 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:45:09

• 回复：sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations! -bearsback- ♂ (24 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:57:03

• thanks. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (54 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 19:48:21

• 回复：thanks. -bearsback- ♂ (203 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:20:55

• 都不错。like the 1st 2 best. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (169 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 19:43:11

• now, like all of them:):) -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:15:27

• 回复：now, like all of them:):) -bearsback- ♂ (195 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:36:18

• 有道理。:) 谢好译 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:51:36

• 直译 -bearsback- ♂ (108 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 22:06:20

• 更直的。。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (118 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 22:42:34

• hahaha, I love it -bearsback- ♂ (33 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 23:04:34

• 宝贝 -bearsback- ♂ (16 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:39:35

• hahahaha... ok -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (34 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:44:47

• 回复：都不错。like the 1st 2 best. -bearsback- ♂ (55 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:25:25