Heoped you to edit a few lines in a hurry. Hope you like it

On a Mid-May bright, sunny morning in N, after an hour driving in the state express way, I glimpsed at the dashboard which showed 8:20 and was happy to have enough time to get to the office. The city looked so beautiful today, but I was in a mood to enjoy the warm weather and light breeze, since I had to make sure to get to the at 9:00. Pay all my attention on the traffic in the rush hour, which was bumper-to-bumper, like a parking lot, I tried to avoid being cut off. Finally, I got into a parking lot and parked my car. After I bought a newspaper at a stand, I walked fast to enter the subway and went to Line 3, the busiest route in the city.

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• simple , clear. -laughs- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/14/2010 postreply 14:30:03

• wow，礼堂，你感动死我了。我等会在过来。我在煮饭。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (31 bytes) () 05/14/2010 postreply 15:16:07

• 李唐， -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (395 bytes) () 05/14/2010 postreply 15:46:02

• hehe,谢谢，我已经改过了，好象 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (110 bytes) () 05/14/2010 postreply 18:21:05

• correction -李唐- ♂ (691 bytes) () 05/14/2010 postreply 18:13:35

• hehe,谢谢，我已经改过了，好象 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (111 bytes) () 05/14/2010 postreply 18:23:27

• Never buy a car produced on Friday. Do you know why? -李唐- ♂ (90 bytes) () 05/14/2010 postreply 18:30:22

• hahaha, i know. i mean -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (146 bytes) () 05/14/2010 postreply 18:38:30