侠客， 少了一节是爱没了。我本不想压韵，既然侠客请求， 我就加点韵吧

来源: bearsback 于 2010-05-09 18:48:27 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (433 bytes)
回答: 两日不见妹， 熊心皆已碎 由 bearsback 于 2010-05-09 11:34:55

wind cracks, waves splash and wheels grind
almost all travelers have got on board
a listless bear lies there with a blank mind
as now the ship is being unanchored

for two days no birdcall has been heard
though the bird once promised the voyage
the rusting leaves yet carry no word
the drifting bottle contains no message

will the bear survive the heartbreak
if the dream voyage they will not make?

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• 改得很漂亮。俩个版本同样喜欢。 -忘侠- ♂ 给 忘侠 发送悄悄话 (38 bytes) () 05/09/2010 postreply 19:03:26

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