爱的磁性 给里拉 （lilac)

脚着里拉屐
身穿里拉衣
等到提笔时
方知水平低

wearing lilac's shoes
dressed in lilac's gown
penning 'love', I muse:
a verb or a noun?

所有跟帖： 

• 鼓掌，LOVE IS VERB &| NOUN。这是儿歌 | SONNET? -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 12:11:39

• haha ~ (儿歌 | SONNET) -bearsback- ♂ (22 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 12:21:10

• Cute and lovely. Chief Writer & Comedian. -念亲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 12:18:08

• 哈哈，你的爱是个动词inspired this little poem -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 12:30:43

• hehe, nice 五言绝句. 里拉哪去了? -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (68 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:12:21

• 宝贝儿呀，你太厉害了。你的才是真正的绝句呀。 -bearsback- ♂ (22 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:41:24

• ohh，李白原来是雄背虎爪猴拳呀~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:47:52

• I mean 熊背~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:50:24

• JUST，我可以拜你为师吗。我也想写诗，先教我儿歌也行 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:20:59

• 记住 -bearsback- ♂ (40 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:47:30

• ha, 密码，你太可爱了~~ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:59:25

• 建议你先败飞鹰为师，出师后在拜师祖。 -amazing_grace- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 16:37:11

• 哈哈,俺刚看到,太有才了,俺很喜欢这儿歌（18-),俺消受的起~ -lilac09- ♀ (351 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:25:44

• 哈哈，看我，丁香都没认的，水平真是低。你改得好。 -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:45:18

• 俺很稀饭您这首英诗里的amusement，比汉诗的有“藏”劲儿 -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 13:54:50

• I took it as "饭太稀" when I first looked at it. -amazing_grace- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 14:44:05

• 网路用语，网路用语 ~~ 就是不好好说话:) -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:32:14

• 谢谢解释，我以前只知道fantasy. -amazing_grace- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:48:15

• haha, 饭太稀. you are smart. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:50:29

• haha I know. I was also amused by the English one -bearsback- ♂ (79 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 19:14:58

• 回复：haha I know. I was also amused by the English one -lilac09- ♀ (381 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 20:47:26

• haha you are smart -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 00:54:02

• 双语诗歌：爱的磁性 给里拉 （lilac) 作者：bearsback -林贝卡- ♀ (4914 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:33:54

• hahahaha my goodness, that is beautiful. thank you! -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:44:40

• 贝卡mm，额的神呀，您先接受俺膜拜一下~~~~~ -lilac09- ♀ (112 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 17:53:31

• COOL。我也要学写 儿歌 & SONNET。很受鼓励 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:13:37

• 切! 这下你又不怕变成书呆子了？？ -lilac09- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:20:11

• 不用变，本来就是书呆子 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:23:59

• 哈么意思？你是说bear是书呆子？hehe。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:25:23

• hehe, i got it。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:36:39

• 这么漂亮！明年我结婚５０周年，一定找贝卡给我弄个跟这一样的。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:30:47

• ５０周年,那得是在SPACE CRAFT上 -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 18:40:32

• Sure. Just let me know when your wedding anniversary is. -林贝卡- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:33:53

• 谢谢贝卡。差点missed点你的美意：） -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 09:58:33

• So pretty and I love the music too~~~ -梅石莹玉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 19:03:36

• 回复：So pretty and I love the music too~~~ -林贝卡- ♀ (1761 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:39:11

• Jeez, that's deep. -小媛- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/01/2009 postreply 22:06:02

• 谢谢大家,祝你们周三愉快,节日快乐. -林贝卡- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/02/2009 postreply 06:43:12