拜读了，你这是意大利式sonnet吗？ABA BCB CDC DED EFE GG

来源: 李唐 于 2009-11-08 19:00:01 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (26 bytes)
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好像有四五处扬抑不对。

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• possibly Italian, I think it is called a terza rima sonnet -monkeyfist- ♂ 给 monkeyfist 发送悄悄话 monkeyfist 的博客首页 (215 bytes) () 11/08/2009 postreply 19:48:44

• maybe the first line can be rewritten like -monkeyfist- ♂ 给 monkeyfist 发送悄悄话 monkeyfist 的博客首页 (45 bytes) () 11/09/2009 postreply 08:36:11

• in his great courtyard --> inside his courtyard -monkeyfist- ♂ 给 monkeyfist 发送悄悄话 monkeyfist 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 11/09/2009 postreply 09:16:33

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