possibly Italian, I think it is called a terza rima sonnet

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回答: sonnet 生命之歌 由 monkeyfist 于 2009-11-08 11:16:57

the rhyme: aba bcb cdc ded ee
I learned this form last night and then tried it.

thank you. you are right, some places did not follow the meter: the first line and a few other places. They can be improved.

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