My mother has always been proud of me. I have always been taking it for granted.
One day， I asked my mom to listen to my rendition “我依然爱你”. At the same time，I asked her to listen to a perfect rendition covered by a wonderful web singer. You know what？My mother still thought my version was much more music to her ears！And she said my singing voice sounded like a singing star！：）
From that moment， I realized my confidence came from my mother's compliments started when I was born... ：）
文章是改出来的，非常感谢木木花时间改正！我尽量学，路漫漫：）
移花接木 修改的版本：
可以多用复合句结合简单句。try 2b less wordy, 我试试rewrite
尽量用你的原话
I take for granted that my mother has always been proud of me.(表达一种状态，一般现代时就可, 从小到大妈妈一直为我而骄傲，完成时更合理）
One day， I asked my mom to listen to my rendition “我依然爱你”and a wonderful cover version by a web singer . You know what？Still, my mother thought mine was much more musical to her ears！And she said my voice sounded like a singing star！：）
From that moment， I realized my confidence had come from my mother's praising since I was born.
Compliment is when you admire something or someone and you give a compliment. 表达客套时用，
Praise is when something or someone did a good job at something so you approve it.
My mother has always been proud of me. I have always been taking it for granted.
One day， I asked my mom to listen to my rendition “我依然爱你”. At the same time，I asked her to listen to a perfect rendition covered by a wonderful web singer. 这两句重复字很多，意思表达清楚了，时间状语就没必要了。
You know what？My mother still thought my version was much more music(need adj. in here, 'music' is a noun, right?) to her ears！And she said my singing voice sounded like a singing star！：）
From that moment， I realized my confidence came from my mother's praising started when I was born... ：）
歌曲下载链接
我依然爱你
作詞：許常德
作曲：劉天健
編曲：屠穎
翻唱：妖妖灵
我紧依你的身子紧握你的手
雨淋湿你的头发淋湿你衣袖
伞握在手 像不曾拥有
离别时刻 你冷得颤抖
如果你那时说爱我
我不要你走
我以为我已经忘了曾经爱过你
直到我一看到你泪涌出眼底
假装沙粒 惹我去哭泣
听你细诉 和她的婚期
走出了机场大门
又是一场 大雨
事到如今 我依然爱你
我孤孤单单留在回忆里
好想陪你再淋一场雨
要世界为我停止呼吸
任你 在她怀里 我依然爱你
我永远记得那一天的雨
来不及说一声我爱你
只随著你静静走向分离
(music)
我以为我已经忘了曾经爱过你
直到我一看到你泪涌出眼底
假装沙粒 惹我去哭泣
听你细诉 和她的婚期
走出了机场大门
又是一场 大雨
事到如今 我依然爱你
我孤孤单单留在回忆里
好想陪你再淋一场雨
要世界为我停止呼吸
任你 在她怀里 我依然爱你
我永远记得那一天的雨
来不及说一声我爱你
只随著你静静走向分离
当雨 下个不停我依然爱你
我孤孤单单留在回忆里
好想陪再你淋一场雨
要世界为我停止呼吸
任你 在她怀里 我依然爱你
我永远记得那一天的雨
来不及说一声我爱你
只随著你静静走向分离
爱的你
