Thank for reading and thank you for your suggestion

来源: 马下人 于 2014-11-16 19:08:17 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (284 bytes)
回答: interesting poem and nice translation 由 bearsback 于 2014-11-15 23:34:20

I had similar thought when I did my fist pass of translation but I could not find right wording. After I read you comment I though over again. I made change to the line. It becomes "容他尽情呼吸却使他喘不上气".

Thank you again.

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