A vivid story!

本帖于 2012-09-30 15:44:17 时间, 由版主 林贝卡 编辑
回答: The Quick Frozen Fish(写作练习)sportwoman2012-09-30 11:29:34

Nice writing! It is fun to read! I just picked a few bricks from the first two paragraphs.


 


Last night some friends of mine came over for dinner. One of them brought me (some) tea leaves and a pack of fish from her friend.  Those fish, according to my friend, were caught a few days ago,  came frozen (freezed) and packaged in a zip-lock bag,  which are commonly seen in the fish market, but at this moment I just could not (can't) get the name of them out of my mouth.



 



Since the city where I live is adjacent to the Atlantic ocean (Ocean), and here and there in the surrounding areas are sprinkled (?) with innumerable rivers and lakes, so if you are a fishing goer (fishing lovers) and have a boat you would have no trouble finding a good place to grab a bite (?).   



 


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多谢声姐! -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (3939 bytes) () 09/30/2012 postreply 16:42:52

更正一下frozen 应该是容词性质的过去分词。came大概与feel,find类似。 -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/30/2012 postreply 17:17:00

It is my Chinese friend's advice, I am not sure. -sportwoman- 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 09/30/2012 postreply 18:29:52

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