A vivid story!

Nice writing! It is fun to read! I just picked a few bricks from the first two paragraphs.

 

Last night some friends of mine came over for dinner. One of them brought me (some) tea leaves and a pack of fish from her friend.  Those fish, according to my friend, were caught a few days ago,  came frozen (freezed) and packaged in a zip-lock bag,  which are commonly seen in the fish market, but at this moment I just could not (can't) get the name of them out of my mouth.

 

Since the city where I live is adjacent to the Atlantic ocean (Ocean), and here and there in the surrounding areas are sprinkled (?) with innumerable rivers and lakes, so if you are a fishing goer (fishing lovers) and have a boat you would have no trouble finding a good place to grab a bite (?).