请海外逸士评评这个译文，谢！

 

暂时命之 《无题》，评评中英互译得如何？

美妙的时光 /  就从现在起 / 人生过程中  / 总会有神奇 / 改变了一切

Tale as old as time
True as it can be
Barely even friends
Then somebody bends
Unexpectedly

在那无意间  / 爱神走近你 / 没人能预知  / 未来的世界 /  美女与野兽

Just a little change
Small, to say the least
Both a little scared
Neither one prepared
Beauty and the Beast

放开你胸怀 / 把握住现在 / 让所有梦想 / 燃起生命中 / 亮丽的色彩

Ever just the same
Ever a surprise
Ever as before
Ever just as sure
As the sun will rise

放开你胸怀 / 把握住现在 / 让所有梦想 /  燃起生命中 /  亮丽的色彩

Tale as old as time
Tune as old as song
Bittersweet and strange
Finding you can change
Learning you were wrong

清歌曼舞中 / 爱茁壮成长 / 让所有祝福 / 围绕你们俩 /  美女与野兽

Certain as the sun
Rising in the east
Tale as old as time
Song as old as rhyme
Beauty and the beast.

 

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 有意思。有两句中文重复了，能改下吗？我也想试着翻译下。:) -doyouknowme- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 14:16:19

• 我的翻译，很搞笑的；没翻重复的那两句哈 -doyouknowme- ♀ (943 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 14:44:22

• 棒! 告你個秘密 -李唐- ♂ (12 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 19:29:28

• 哈，真坏呀！:D -doyouknowme- ♀ (66 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 20:22:59

• 很搞笑的，我笑了半天了！ -李唐- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 19:31:08

• 哼哼，当心笑岔了气哈！呵呵 -doyouknowme- ♀ (239 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 20:29:09

• 山大同学语录：语言为人民服务。所以，信达雅的理论不是僵死的教条。 -李唐- ♂ (216 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 05:49:33

• 為什麼基本對不上號﹖是算翻譯嗎﹖ -海外逸士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 15:37:35

• 以您當今活的中國人的中英文水平沒有出你左右的水平 -李唐- ♂ (31 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 18:16:01