Like your diary!

来源: NewVoice 于 2012-04-08 04:13:14 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (531 bytes)
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回答: 冠盖满京华（日记） 由 sportwoman 于 2012-04-07 21:21:22

 

I had many sleepless nights like yours.

- would "jelly-covered" be better than "jellies covered"?

- brought me -> brought to me (not sure)

- chat -> chatted

- my chocolate are all gone -> my chocolate is all gone (not sure)

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• 多谢指正！我的措辞比较口语化。 -sportwoman- ♀ 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (878 bytes) () 04/08/2012 postreply 04:55:55

• 表达得不够严谨，还望多多指正！多谢！ -sportwoman- ♀ 给 sportwoman 发送悄悄话 sportwoman 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 04/08/2012 postreply 04:59:44

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