多谢指正！我的措辞比较口语化。

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回答: Like your diary! 由 NewVoice 于 2012-04-08 04:13:14

I had many sleepless nights like yours.

- would "jelly-covered" be better than "jellies covered"? 直接从巧克力盒子上的描述。I think you are right using jelly-covered in a formal manner.

I had many sleepless nights like yours.

- would "jelly-covered" be better than "jellies covered"?

- brought me -> brought to me (not sure) 口语化

- chat -> chatted 对的

- my chocolate are all gone -> my chocolate is all gone (not sure)。好的

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