请老师们帮忙改改这句话好么？有必要改么？

He wondered how it was that the impressions of winter could so completely describe the way he perceived himself--small beneath a threatening sky,and surrounded everywhere by the white silence of nothing but space.

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• 回复：请老师们帮忙改改这句话好么？有必要改么？ -EnLearner- ♀ (379 bytes) () 11/12/2011 postreply 15:18:53

• 谢谢。 -hry- ♀ (109 bytes) () 11/12/2011 postreply 15:31:40

• 不用谢。 -EnLearner- ♀ (104 bytes) () 11/12/2011 postreply 15:37:24

• 刚刚路过这儿。昨天在职场睡着了 -路过这儿- ♀ (325 bytes) () 11/13/2011 postreply 10:06:06

• 谢谢路过！你的解释很讲得通。 -hry- ♀ (291 bytes) () 11/13/2011 postreply 11:04:48

• 谢谢你接受我的尝试。语言是为人民服务的，人民不是为语言服务的， 哈 -路过这儿- ♀ (201 bytes) () 11/13/2011 postreply 11:56:56

• hahaha, 看了。 -hry- ♀ (437 bytes) () 11/13/2011 postreply 12:47:15

• 厉害，厉害：）我听说过magi那篇很著名。 -路过这儿- ♀ (119 bytes) () 11/13/2011 postreply 13:05:54

• 谢姐姐（＾Ｏ＾☆♪ -京燕花园- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/16/2011 postreply 10:31:02