回复：请老师们帮忙改改这句话好么？有必要改么？

 

不是老师。你写的吗？你看这样好一点吗？

He wondered how it was that the impressions of winter could so completely describe the way he perceived himself--small beneath a threatening sky,and surrounded everywhere by the white silence of nothing but space.

 

 

 

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• 谢谢。 -hry- ♀ (109 bytes) () 11/12/2011 postreply 15:31:40

• 不用谢。 -EnLearner- ♀ (104 bytes) () 11/12/2011 postreply 15:37:24