谢谢班长这么忙，还帮俺看文，敬礼

冤枉呀上次被MM你骂了以后，都老实多了，没敢再乱用词 :D

(1) her heart sagged. 我从没听到过sag这样用的，what's wrong with sank?

>> I learned this word from a short story by Ha Jin

原句: “My heart sagged as I lay back in the seat to take a nap.”

心往下沉，因为不高兴或担忧什么的 

(2) But as a self-claimed amateur artist with good looks, ->self-acclaimed?

>>self-claimed -自称，自封，说这个男的有点自以为是

e.g. B. Howard "The Self-Claimed Prince of Pop" Arrives In Japan

自称是流行音乐王子

（3）One day, suddenly he didn’t reply her emails any more and he no longer visited the photography forum. 我会直接说： One day, he stopped replying her emails and visiting the photogrphy forum.

>>好象我的是罗嗦了点

（4）two my best pieces I wanna share with you. two of my best pieces
>>这点是有问题，我想表达，最好的两件作品，而不是最好的作品中的两件

改成：”my two best pieces” instead of “two my best pieces”?

最后情节上，我有点不明白为啥also for the very last time in her whole life? 她没有自杀吧？还是她决定再也不看雪了？
>>应该是没死，因为不是黛玉，是再也没有去北方看雪

 

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• 恩，我跟你悄悄说，别让Carpediem和其他哈金的粉丝听到哈 -非文学青年- ♀ (403 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 14:18:07

• 哈哈~ -lilac09- ♀ (1624 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 14:54:27

• 哦，好像是。 -非文学青年- ♀ (184 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 15:32:04