Sorry Misread your first sentence. Don't understand why you reje

you have "such as A, B instead of C, D" not "such as A, B, and C instead of C, D, and E".  also "him.. someone"

whether = if, not really. Sometimes whether is better sometimes if is better.

I sensed your defensiveness and suddenly understood why you posted your writing, for bricks, haha.

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• DCH老兄误会了 -非文学青年- ♀ (1242 bytes) () 08/13/2011 postreply 11:53:34

• 这个文青，给你逃避每周一文找借口吧。开个玩笑。真喜欢你的写作！！！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/13/2011 postreply 12:00:42

• 刚才出门去了。 -DCH- ♂ (278 bytes) () 08/13/2011 postreply 13:28:18

• 你小子看透我了！哈哈 -非文学青年- ♀ (813 bytes) () 08/13/2011 postreply 14:32:52