是的,it will be much better if you put "instead of xx" in paraphasis.
The original author's structure is better because it is more clear.
如果一两块薄砖就让你停止Post Writing,那我更怀疑你最初要砖的诚意LA.
不过我不担心你不再POST,because you will:)
是的,it will be much better if you put "instead of xx" in paraphasis.
The original author's structure is better because it is more clear.
如果一两块薄砖就让你停止Post Writing,那我更怀疑你最初要砖的诚意LA.
不过我不担心你不再POST,because you will:)
• 你小子看透我了!哈哈 -非文学青年- ♀ (813 bytes) () 08/13/2011 postreply 14:32:52