谢谢愚教授仔细的批改!

回答: Good jobs!EnLearner2011-08-10 20:59:38

 

先看一遍,文教授/专家好象说过会给你看的。

A locomotive has to be added fuel, such as coal, firewood, or other flammable substance, consuming which may provide motion or energy for the machine.

可能是我少见多怪,定语从句的连词前只用介词而不用分词?
为什么不先原文那样分为两句?

你说的很对。

这句话我在想如果只用一句话该怎样表达呢?很困惑。希望文青大师能帮助解决。

The body of an animal also needs fuel supplementation being called food, which may  provide energy to the animal.

may is not needed?

accepted

In order to ignite the flammable substance and  oxidize the food in the animal body, oxygen is essential. 

ignite --> burn or combust.

accepted

The locomotive is composed of special parts:  the hearth to accept and ignite the flammable substance, the pipe to transport steam, the wheel to make the locomotive move on, and the chimney to exhaust gas

hearth ?

查的字典:炉膛。newton也用了这个词。

gas --> waste gas

accepted

While  the animal body is also composed of different parts: gastrointestinal tract to ingest and absorb food, the emunctory organ to evacuate waste, the arteries and veins to transport oxygen and store nutriment, and the legs and wings to move on.

the legs and wings to move on 没有翻出原意:使动物行进的腿或翅膀

accepted。主要是不会接着怎么用不定式怎么表达出来。and the legs and wings to move on the body of animal?

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回复:谢谢愚教授仔细的批改! -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (755 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 22:10:45

I happed to see the sentence you just deleted. I like that one b -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (387 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 22:26:33

回复:I happed to see the sentence you just deleted. I like that on -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (444 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 22:38:17

统统都是可燃的东西。文青用了consumption of which. -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:00:59

文教授请再看一下这条。 -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:05:25

愚教授说得非常对!这里最好不用从句。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:10:07

问题是从语言的角度,which指代那个名词? -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (75 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:15:25

谢谢愚教授精益求精,同意,这里不用从句了!newton用了不定式,没有用从句,他的表达对吗? -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:20:54

我看错了,newton也用了单句,没用从句。 -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:25:37

TA好象漏翻了一句。 -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (795 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:30:35

我看了原文,原文用的从句。 the consumption of which...文青大师说对了! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 beautifulwind 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:40:14

是从句。假教授只能说:因为这里指代fuel比较明显,所以不严谨也就不严谨了。金耳朵说对了! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:43:06

Why? -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (175 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:47:45

恩,我的理解是such as... 也是修饰noun1的, 和which从句并列。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (74 bytes) () 08/11/2011 postreply 00:10:41

Thanks. Now it makes more sense to me. -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (184 bytes) () 08/11/2011 postreply 07:23:58

应该是指代immediately proceeding的名词。在这里用从句不严谨。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:21:06

Thank you, Prof. Wen. -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 23:31:17

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