想应文青 or 热青 writing 提议,based on Newton post

The writing exercise has stimulated great interest in this forum, as evidenced by the large number of comments followed. Therefore, this activity should be continued/resumed.

 

As most of you might have noticed, it requires a lot of energy/effort to provide critiques to each writing homework and at the same time, it is also very important for one to receive such critiques/comments for his/her homework in order to improve writing skills. Therefore I am proposing to post a paragraph of well-translated text in Chinese on the forum each Monday for us to translate it into English. On Fridays, the original work in English will be posted for us to compare with our own translation.

 

I happened to encounter an article titled “paper tiger” by Wesley Wang, published on a New York magazine, has generated great interests amongst Asian-American community.

 

 

newton post:

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The translation homework has exicted so many English learners' nerve and energy as is reflected in hot comments one after another. This activity should be resumed as it stimulates the practice of English much more strongly than any other exercise.

As you guys have already found that it requires a lot of energy to make corrections. Without corrections, one may feel lacking guide to the right direction. Here I propose to put a paragraph of well translated Chinese text on Monday on the website for us to do the translation, the original English will be added on Friday to compare.

I notice an artical titled "paper tiger" by Wesley Yang, published on New York magzine, caused great hit among Asian-American community.

 

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非常棒!小薇童鞋总是又快又好! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (215 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 21:02:35

还有一点:interest还是interests? 你写的里面两个都出现了。 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 21:20:41

嗯。谢谢文清。 这几个的方是不妥 -同学小薇- 给 同学小薇 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 07:49:18

回复:想应文青 or 热青 writing 提议,based on Newton post -i999- 给 i999 发送悄悄话 i999 的博客首页 (62 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 00:08:22

About the last paragraph: -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (96 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 03:21:05

谢谢。我再想想 -同学小薇- 给 同学小薇 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 07:50:12

也响应号召,练一练。 -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (2035 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 03:28:04

Thank 同学小薇, NewVoice,...for your excellent work -newton123- 给 newton123 发送悄悄话 newton123 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 07:50:41

Great piece! -同学小薇- 给 同学小薇 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 07:54:41

沙发啊!进步神速。Moreover。your 美坛姐妹兄弟大会合 is amazine。 -DrunkerKickass- 给 DrunkerKickass 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 04:46:24

谢谢。给几块砖呀 -同学小薇- 给 同学小薇 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 07:50:51

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