About the last paragraph:

The last paragraph is still a little bit awkward. I am not sure about its grammer either.

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谢谢。我再想想 -同学小薇- 给 同学小薇 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 07:50:12

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