试译: Peace by Sara Teasdale

（原诗很美妙，译个大意献丑。）

Peace by Sara Teasdale

Peace flows into me
  As the tide to the pool by the shore; 
  It is mine forevermore,
  It will not ebb like the sea.

I am the pool of blue 
  That worships the vivid sky; 
  My hopes were heaven-high,
  They are all fulfilled in you.

I am the pool of gold 
  When sunset burns and dies -- 
  You are my deepening skies;
  Give me your stars to hold.

 

潮水漫过岸边清池，
安宁流入我心间。
祥和永驻心底，
不似潮汐时隐时见。

我是一池青蓝，
仰慕着蓝蓝的天。
我的心愿试比天高，
今在你安宁中实现。

我是一池金色，
夕阳下晚霞尽燃。
你是我深邃的太空，
让我拥有群星灿烂。

所有跟帖： 

• 第一次读到Sara Teasdale的诗歌,谢谢你美妙的翻译和精美的配图。 -斓婷- ♀ (2032 bytes) () 03/28/2012 postreply 11:00:29

• 谢谢。这两首没有读过。真是美诗美画！ -湘西山民- ♂ (57 bytes) () 03/28/2012 postreply 13:06:58

• 山民老师水平实在高，学生回头再仔细拜读。祝晚安！ -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/28/2012 postreply 14:25:17

• 翻得真棒！学习了。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/28/2012 postreply 16:17:03

• 不错 -whatday- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/28/2012 postreply 21:01:55

• A wonderful translation!!! -NewVoice- ♀ (132 bytes) () 03/29/2012 postreply 05:31:31

• A poem can have different meanings to different people. -湘西山民- ♂ (661 bytes) () 03/29/2012 postreply 08:36:45

• 谢各位捧场。大家多交流。 -湘西山民- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/29/2012 postreply 10:42:30