致少女 For My Love 作者：元梁，翻译：美坛奇葩

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/> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> /> 诗歌：致少女 -- 献给莹莹 　作者：元梁 　诗歌：For My Love -- Dedicated to Ying Ying 　翻译：美坛奇葩; 艺术创作：婉蕠 清澈的小河 依偎着 起伏的山壑 A clear river Winding with A gully in the mountains 简陋的小屋 点缀着 碧绿的秧禾 Simple shanties Dotting the Green landscape 扬鞭的小童 吆喝着 笨重的牛车 Whip-flipping kids Tending their Heavy oxcarts 飞舞的小鸟 斑斓着 茂密的枝柯 Flying birds Coloring Dense leaves and branches 秀美的少女 欢喜这 田园的春色 A beautiful girl Is taking pleasure In the scenes of nature 俏丽的面庞 纯净的眼波 你, 却是我的天国 Your pretty face And innocent glances Make my kingdom of heaven 哦, 可爱的姑娘 你象那安详的白鸽 一切神情 都那么温柔, 平和 Oh, my lovely girl Peaceful as a dove Your expression Is gentle and calm 哦, 亲爱的姑娘 你如那优雅的天鹅 每个姿态 都那么高贵, 独特 Oh, my dear girl Graceful as a swan Every gesture of yours Is noble and unique 多么希望 ---- 这爱意始萌的欢乐 在此铭刻 你的笑靨 将永远珍放在 我心中的像册 How much I hope -- My joy of sprouting love Is here inscribed And your smile Will always remain In my heart's album 多么盼望 ---- 这爱意始萌的欢乐 此水长歌 你的情怀 将永久难忘在 我未来的生活 How much I expect -- That my joy of budding love Will with the river persist And your image In my whole life Will never faint 多想就这样陪着你呵 好像苍山伴着青河 … I am dreaming to be with you forever Just like green mountains with the clear river … ******** 元梁/Yuan Liang Beijing. May 1, 1980. Translation: 美坛奇葩 Artistic Design: 婉蕠 @WXC. June 22, 2010./> 450) this.width=450" />

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• Thank 婉蕠 for the artistic design !!! -美坛奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 13:37:13

• 美坛奇葩，感谢你为美语坛的网友们翻译了无数的作品。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 15:59:27

• 经典的美贴，这个要鼎！ -千与.千寻- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 14:50:35

• 谢谢小千。祝你夏天快乐。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 16:00:10

• 奇葩添异彩，美坛更娇艳，鼎！ -水中捞月- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 16:34:07

• 好诗句。 -婉蕠- ♀ (72 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 17:07:27

• better -bearsback- ♂ (35 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 17:57:30

• excepting your version. houhou! -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 18:31:27

• oops,w.w. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 12:23:30

• What is o o p s , w . w . ? -美坛奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:27:14

• wrong words. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 19:18:15

• Thanks. I thought it was a World War. -美坛奇葩- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/24/2010 postreply 05:32:59

• hope there will be an English wording war in this forum. hehe -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/24/2010 postreply 09:08:41

• It is your turn now. -美坛奇葩- ♂ (29 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 07:10:22

• yes, bear, it is your turn. :) i'm waiting for your v1 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 10:38:16

• haha 宝贝，我刷碗还没吃饭呢 -bearsback- ♂ (218 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:01:06

• A good beginning -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (104 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:15:35

• sweetie, let's help15 run the remaining -bearsback- ♂ (14 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:24:10

• help15 is great. 据说她刚买了３块bricks。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 16:45:06

• haha, then time for her to show off:) -bearsback- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:45:47

• the alliteration"clear creek clinges" 真的有种 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (51 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:27:37

• sharp ears -bearsback- ♂ (105 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:54:26

• 在这句里，我喜欢 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (267 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 14:00:59

• 回复：在这句里，我喜欢 -bearsback- ♂ (196 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 14:09:20

• 你好厉害！PFPF. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (368 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 17:15:28

• 对不起啊，bear。我是瞎说一通。haha。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (66 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:24:30

• 都是我借你一块砖给闹的, 哼, 还回来! haha. -help15- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:41:14

• you were absolutely right when you said -bearsback- ♂ (73 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:47:01

• 回复：对不起啊，bear。我是瞎说一通。haha。 -bearsback- ♂ (88 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:49:51

• sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations! -bearsback- ♂ (329 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:45:09

• 回复：sweetie, that is very true. thank you for your explanations! -bearsback- ♂ (24 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 18:57:03

• thanks. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (54 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 19:48:21

• 回复：thanks. -bearsback- ♂ (203 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:20:55

• 都不错。like the 1st 2 best. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (169 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 19:43:11

• now, like all of them:):) -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:15:27

• 回复：now, like all of them:):) -bearsback- ♂ (195 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:36:18

• 有道理。:) 谢好译 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:51:36

• 直译 -bearsback- ♂ (108 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 22:06:20

• 更直的。。 -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (118 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 22:42:34

• hahaha, I love it -bearsback- ♂ (33 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 23:04:34

• 宝贝 -bearsback- ♂ (16 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:39:35

• hahahaha... ok -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (34 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:44:47

• 回复：都不错。like the 1st 2 best. -bearsback- ♂ (55 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 21:25:25

• 才看见，，真美啊！太感激奇葩兄的美译了！同时感谢婉蕠妹妹的美贴！ -元梁- ♂ (60 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 21:20:25

• 问候元梁，谢谢你的好诗。祝你夏安。 -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 06:55:15

• 这好像不是新版的，要不要我再把新版的诗词贴出来？再次深深地感谢仁兄和大家！ -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/22/2010 postreply 21:24:27

• beautiful! final, star? :) -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 10:40:30

• I have handed in my homework. -美坛奇葩- ♂ (42 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 11:11:59

• you did a wonderful job. you got A plus.. -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (24 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 11:50:08

• 回复： -美坛奇葩- ♂ (43 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 11:58:18

• hehehe... i expect your goal is "++" or "+++" -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (49 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:19:17

• See you in Los Angeles. -美坛奇葩- ♂ (63 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:26:14

• wowow, it is Los Angeles. hahaha. yes, i am waiting LA -戏雨飞鹰- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/23/2010 postreply 13:31:22