Amazingly well done. Like a few others, your

first Chinese-to-English translation captures the beauty of being simple.  The fourth is also praiseworthy.

Your second E-to-C is outstanding: it takes care of cultural differences that might pose some difficulty for Chinese readers, I think.

And someone finally gets "go down" right!  :)

It takes a sharp-eyed person to get "cigarette smoking"; the whole thing would have been almost perfect if only you had put that "s" somewhere else.  :) 

 

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• 多谢细致有质量点评。 望以后仍能不吝赐教。 -树的花花世界- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/03/2021 postreply 09:40:37