脸皮再厚一次贴一首翻译自己的上了英文诗歌网站首页的 Maple leaves on the wall

墙上的枫叶

 

春天里你告别我去北方

为了还没融化的雪

留下我面对无语的墙

你画满了火红的枫叶

在秋风里握紧树梢

你反复地叮嘱-

来找我吧

当墙上的枫叶落满你的手掌

 

Maple leaves on the wall

In the spring, you bid farewell to me for the north,
for the snow that has not melted.
Leave me facing the silent wall,
where you painted flaming maple leaves
clinging to the twigs in the autumn wind.
You adjure me constantly-
Come to me,
when the maple leaves fall and cover your palms.

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- You adjure me constantly- come to me, when the maple leaves fall and cover your palms"  This poem is beautiful.a year ago   x

 

Andrew Blitman - Well done!

Enjoyed it!a year ago   x

 

Ali Tajmir-Riahi - Very nice job please read Autumn wind, which related and you may like ita year ago   x

 

Jenny Middleton - Carefully constructed descriptions that create an emotional impact.a year ago   x

 

Ice Brat - I am into the spring and words you draw so vividly and strongly.a year ago   x

 

XylophonicBlues - This sounds like where I live..evoked personal familiar..nice write

Greata year ago   x

 

 

Bellsnoel - Fave line is Leave me...overall strongly written.a year ago   x

 

- I really loved reading this one and also loved the atmosphere it conveys!

Thanks for sharing!a year ago   x

 

ExquisiteMind - A very contemplative piece of work. Keep writing more.

Lovely.2 years ago   x

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• 写得真好！看跟帖也很学英文表达啊！：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/01/2021 postreply 10:53:30

• +10086 站这里。。 -盈盈一笑间- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/01/2021 postreply 15:10:24

• 很棒！ -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/01/2021 postreply 13:11:00

• 第一句分开就更好了 -忒忒绿- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/01/2021 postreply 13:13:00

• 干净明亮 -老键- ♂ (299 bytes) () 05/01/2021 postreply 17:10:42

• 写得译得都好！ -天山晨- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/01/2021 postreply 20:34:21

• 美极啦，有意境有画面感的好诗。赞才子。 -艾唱- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2021 postreply 13:13:17