Few suggestions:

来源: 马下人 于 2014-03-20 13:28:15 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 阅读数 : (878 bytes)
回答: 法律相关的段落寻求帮助 由 说谁谁 于 2014-03-20 03:21:31

Few suggestions:

1. "Circuit" as an entity may be defined in the previous paragraphs.  Please check.

2. "concerning of" defined the third party.  If I speak to my fiend in China who is in a remote place and is dumb and blind I am probably not violcating the agreement because he has not interest here at all.

3.  I do not think there is anything to do with "股权证".
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