【翻译写作】练习之四原文+汇总,欢迎大家探讨

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实验证明,儿童在很小的时候就可以开始学习游泳。在洛杉矶的一个特设的游泳池里,孩子们甚至在还没有学会走路时就已经能熟练地在水下屏住呼吸了。两个月的 婴儿并未显得不愿意入水。他们很快便适应了游泳,以致能捡起池底的物品。这些幼小的游泳运动员非常喜爱的一种游戏是水下三轮车比赛。三轮车并排放在7英尺 深的游泳池底上。孩子们比赛看谁先到达游泳池的另一端。很多孩子用脚蹬车,但多数孩子更愿意推或是拉着三轮车。有些孩子能够跑完游泳池的全长而不用露出水 面换气。他们将来是否能成为奥林匹克的冠军,这只能由时间来作出回答。与此同时,他们对我们中的那些游不了5码就已喘不过气来的人应该是种鼓舞。


原文:NCE II Lesson 94: Future champions


Experiments have proved that children can be instructed in swimming at a very early age. At a special swimming pool in Los Angeles, children become expert at holding their breath under water even before they can walk. Babies of two months old do not appear to be reluctant to enter the water. It is not long before they are so accustomed to swimming that they can pick up weights from the floor of the pool. A game that is very popular with these young swimmers is the underwater tricycle race. Tricycles are lined up on the floor of the pool seven feet under water. The children compete against each other to reach the other end of the pool. Many pedal their tricycles, but most of them prefer to push or drag them. Some children can cover the whole length of the pool without coming up for breath even once. Whether they will ever become future Olympic champions, only time will tell. Meanwhile, they should encourage those among us who cannot swim five yards before they are gasping for air.


Newton123


It has been proved by experiments that children are able to learn swimming at  very early age. In a special swimming pool in Los Angles, infants have been able to hold breath under water before they can walk. The two-month infants show no sign of being unwilling in water. They adapt to swimming so quickly that they can pick up objects on the bottom of the pool. Their favorite sport is a tricycle race in water. Tricycles are set side by side on the bottom of swimming pool of seven feet deep. The one who first reaches the other end of the pool wins. Many kids pedal the tricycles whereas more prefer pushing or pulling the devices. Some of them have been able to cover the whole distance without lift(lifting) their head out of the water for breathing. Only may time answer if they become an Olympic champions in (the) future. They should be very encouraging for some of us who become out of breath in trying to swim the first five yards.


非文学青年


Experiments have shown that children can start learning to swim when they are very young. In a specially-designed swimming pool of Los Angeles, children that couldn’t walk yet held their breath under water with ease. Even two-month-old infants did not appear hesitant going into the water. They got used to swimming so fast as to pick up stuff from the pool bottom. One of the young swimmers’ favorite games was underwater tricycle race. Tricycles were lined up on the 7-foot-deep swimming pool bottom. The children competed to be the first to reach the other end of the pool. Many children paddled with their feet on the tricycles, but most of them liked to push or pull them. Some children could go the whole length without breathing out of the water. Only time can tell whether they could become an Olympic Champions or not. In the meanwhile, it should be an inspiration for those of us who can’t swim more than 5 yards without being out of breath.


美风


Experiments show that children may begin learning swimming at an early age. In a specific swimming pool in Los Angeles, children are able to skillfully hold their breath under the water even though they have not learned walking yet. Two months old babies(这个不是太确定,但觉得年龄做形容词的时候应该:Two-month-old babies) do not show that they are reluctant to go into thewater. They are used to swimming very soon, so that they may pick up stuff underneath the water. One of the little swimmers' most favorite games is the tricycle race underneath the water. The tricycles are lined in a row underneath of the 7- foot-depth swimming pool. It is to see who is going to reach the other end of the swimming pool first. Many children step into the tricycle, but most of the children either push or pull them. Some of the children can even finish running the whole length of the swimming pool without breathing above water. Whether they are able to win championship in the Olympics, it depends on the time to give an answer. In the meantime, they should be an inspiration to those who are unable to breath after swiming less than 5 feet.


美风:underneathunder的一点儿区别:我查了underneathclose under especially so as to be hidden underneath a mask of friendliness> underneath his slacks>


NewVoice


It has been proved experimentally that children can learn how to swim at young age. In a specially-designed swimming pool in Los Angeles, children could hold their breath skillfully before they learned how to walk. Two-month old babies did not show unwillingness to be in water, and they quickly learned swimming and could pick up the objects placed at the bottom of the pool. One of the favorable games of these young swimmers is underwater tricycle racing. Tricycles are placed in parallel 7 feet under the water. Children raced to see who would be the first to reach the other end. Many children paddled the tricycles, but most of them liked to push or pull their tricycles. Some of them raced the whole length without coming out of water to breathe. Only time will tell if they will become champions of Olympic Game. At mean time, they encourage us who are out of breath after swimming for less than 5 yards.


 


愚公


Experiments show that children can learn swimming at their very early age.  In Los Ange, children even learn how to hold their breath effortlessly under water in a specially designed swiming pool. There is no sign that the two months old babies refuse to get into the water.  They get used to swimming so soon that they are able to pick up things from the bottom of the pool.  One of the games that these baby athelets enjoy very much is the under-water tricycle race.  Tricycles are lined up at the bottom of a swiming pool of seven feet deep.   The game is to see which baby will reach the other end of the pool first.  Many of them pad the peddle with their feet.  But most of  them rather push or pull the tricycles.  Some of the babies even can swming across the pool whihtout letting their face get out of the water to take a breath.   Only time can tell whether they will be a future Olympic champion.  Meanwhile, aren't they an inspiration for those of us who are out of breath just by swmming no more than five yards.


follower


Experiments indicate that children can begin their swimming lessons at a very early age. In a specially designed swimming pool in Los Angles, children were able to skillfully hold their breath under water even while still unable to walk (or learning to walk). Two-month old babies did not seem to hesitate to enterthe water. They adapted themselves to swimming so quickly that they could even pick up objects from the bottom of the pool. One of those little athletes' favorite games was the under-water tricycle competition. Tricycles were lined up on the bottom of this 7 foot deep pool. The children competed to see who would be the first one to reach the other side of the pool. Many children pedaled, but most would rather push or pull their tricycles. Some ran the entire length of the pool without getting above water to take a breath. Only time will reveal whether they will become Olympic champions. Meanwhile they should be inspirations to those of us who cannot swim 5 yards without catching their breath.

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这次呢? -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 09:39:39

这次看到了!大谢文青付出的辛苦! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 09:43:00

不知道为啥那个underneath解释给的例子没全给出来,在这里: -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (276 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 09:44:51

谢谢文青!经你指导,我现在明白underneath和under的区别了!!! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 09:48:01

我汗,我当时报了名,结果一次作业也没叫。这次看了总结, -cutestream- 给 cutestream 发送悄悄话 cutestream 的博客首页 (41 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 11:51:44

好,看你下次的杰作啊。看了你上面的贴,嗯,小溪是个很认真的童鞋! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:09:39

你千万别打击我,一听‘杰作’我就吓着了。我只在我的研究领域写东西还可以, -cutestream- 给 cutestream 发送悄悄话 cutestream 的博客首页 (43 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:18:32

好,那换个词,等你的“作业”! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:20:54

刚刚才匆忙翻了一下。对照原文后帮助很大。谢谢你。 -toast2011- 给 toast2011 发送悄悄话 (110 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 11:56:59

我来copy文青从前的解释:标的红字的是我觉得用法有问题的,绿的是我觉得要insert或者替代你的红的翻译的,黄色highlig -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (753 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:13:39

谢谢美风的热心!!! 抓住再问,那个原文的录音一般在?谢谢. -toast2011- 给 toast2011 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:30:34

回复:谢谢美风的热心!!! 抓住再问,那个原文的录音一般在?谢谢. -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (150 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:35:06

小千的作业在这。翻得很好! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (10683 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 14:57:25

奇怪,怎么我早上没看到。我不敢放到主贴去,怕又给弄成blank贴了。小千翻得不错! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 16:35:36

我发现原因了:一点你的主帖,不知什么原因,小千的帖不在里面。 -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (69 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 19:48:23

你们俩,哈哈~我翻译的好么?今早起来我都没敢看!昨晚太困了 -千与.千寻- 给 千与.千寻 发送悄悄话 千与.千寻 的博客首页 (197 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 19:49:54

你的好多用词非常到位。我偷学了好几个! -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 20:01:37

看到原文是"underwater tricycle race"我确实很开心呀!^v^ -千与.千寻- 给 千与.千寻 发送悄悄话 千与.千寻 的博客首页 (39 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 20:06:53

Thanks! It was a great learning experience. -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 15:13:40

新声音翻得很好 -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (76 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 16:41:17

Yes, thank you for pointing that out. -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 17:46:47

I mean, thanks for the correction. -NewVoice- 给 NewVoice 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 17:54:03

You are welcome. thanks for sharing your translation with us. -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 21:03:17

谢谢。很受益。lesson -follower- 给 follower 发送悄悄话 (69 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 15:42:58

完全同意!!!我也深有同感! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 16:36:18

谢谢非文学青年主持的[翻译写作]系列,学习了。 -婉蕠- 给 婉蕠 发送悄悄话 婉蕠 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 19:08:02

多谢菲教授和美风助教。辛苦了,周末愉快。 -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 21:52:32

我啥也没干,都是文青的贡献。我是专门偷艺滴。 -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 22:05:02

看你忙上忙下的,没有功劳也有苦老吧。~ -EnLearner- 给 EnLearner 发送悄悄话 EnLearner 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 22:25:47

俺为了跟师傅偷艺,端端茶,倒倒水还是能办到滴。 -beautifulwind- 给 beautifulwind 发送悄悄话 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 22:32:47

晚来一会儿,美教授和愚教授又在这里挤兑我呢,愚教授,你等着,我拿板砖砸你去! -非文学青年- 给 非文学青年 发送悄悄话 非文学青年 的博客首页 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 23:24:17

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