Sis, you know how much I enjoy throwing bricks at you.

Again an excellent and interesting writing!

1. rotten-egg-attracting essays like me -> rotten-egg-attracting essays like mine

2. busting asses -> busting their asses

3. that’s when you posted your writing - that was when ....

4. Think of something that interests your reader -> Think of something that interests your readers

5. google - Google

6. I believe, as we are here to learn -> But I believe that, as we are here to learn

7. you get to know the person better and even become good friends - you get to know the person better and even become his/her good friend

8. I know how much joy you get picking up on -> I know how much joy you get of picking up on

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• Defense来喽～～～ -非文学青年- ♀ (842 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 16:22:28

• 最喜欢看高手过招！养眼！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 16:35:10

• CO：最喜欢看高手过招！养眼！ -金迷- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 18:03:23

• Counter-defense, just kidding. -NewVoice- ♀ (283 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 17:44:37

• 小声提醒一下新声姐，“saw you beg”文青用得是不定式，因为是saw，to省略了。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (355 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 18:01:25

• Oh, my bad. Learned.不用小声，大声嚷嚷我受得了. Haha, thanks! -NewVoice- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 18:06:04

• 咱们是自己人。哈哈，和小千学的。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 18:26:08

• 这其实是东西话啦，小千可能不知道 -金迷- ♂ (153 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 18:34:48

• 东西话还是东北话。haha -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 18:43:05

• 南北话~~~ -金迷- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 18:52:19

• 我还真不知道＂自己人＂的这层含义～看来你们都误会我的本意了 -千与.千寻- ♀ (38 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 20:03:50

• 小声提醒一下 beg, begging 都可以，表达的意思小有区别... -金迷- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 18:12:28

• Thanks! 金迷, learned! -NewVoice- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 18:23:10

• 啥区别？ -jennea- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 18:35:29

• 我的理解：saw sb. beg 是不定式。saw begging 是分词。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (324 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 18:41:59

• 在这里区别是啥？ 一个正在begging，一个已经beg过？ 我从来搞不太清楚 -jennea- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 19:05:21

• 文青应该清楚。saw beg 是不是一直beg，而saw begging是否是正在beg？ -beautifulwind- ♀ (102 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 19:12:38

• 找到了。。。 -jennea- ♀ (226 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 19:16:41

• 回复：找到了。。。 -EnLearner- ♀ (266 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 19:35:01

• first one should mean -jennea- ♀ (196 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 19:43:35

• 谢谢姐姐，替我说话的人还挺多的哈 -非文学青年- ♀ (43 bytes) () 09/01/2011 postreply 09:32:56

• Sis，updated. We are going to a concert tonight. I will respond m -非文学青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/31/2011 postreply 17:02:56